It's been a busy and difficult day but since this is a daily poetry blog, I decided I should keep up. I picked something from my recent happier times with my beloved. This one is particularly painful because it is a combination of a shared moment combined with looking forward to what I believed was our future.
The Bookstore
The weather outside is cold
as my lover and I move hand-in-hand
through the rows of books.
She takes a copy of something from the shelf
and thumbs through the pages
as I look at her.
She catches me looking
but before she can tell me to stop
I pull her near and kiss her.
I do not hear the book fall to the floor
as we wrap our arms around each other
holding tightly.
Life outside can be cold
as my lover and I move heart-in-heart
through the rows of shadows.
Whatever we take from the shelves
we thumb through together
as we look to each other.
When we catch each other looking
we look back and smile
and pull together.
We do not hear the chaos around us
as we wrap our arms around each other
holding tightly.
I've been writing poetry since my first regeneration. Feel free to comment on how good or bad you think it is. Some of it is speed poetry which I never used to be able to do and some of you will say I still can't. So feel free to be fair...but always be kind!
Friday, February 29, 2008
Thursday, February 28, 2008
On Being Perfect (28-Feb-2008)
I'll let you decide if this was ingenious or just plain lazy but I decided to complete three of this week's assignements in one poem. So here for your consideration are the Poefusion Friday 5 and 3WW in the ReadWritePoem requested pantoum form.
On Being Perfect
He tied his life in parcels small
Each bound tight with bits of string
Then hung with care upon a wall
Apologies owed for not a thing.
Each bound tight with bits of string
A mural made for all to see;
Apologies owed for not a thing
His life so tidy; nothing free.
A mural made for all to see;
Considered him in light so bright.
His life so tidy; nothing free,
So all his faults could not take flight.
Considered him in light so bright.
Dilated eyes with vision blurred
So all his faults could not take flight
His past in present deep interred.
Dilated eyes with vision blurred
His life to all now unkempt seemed.
His past in present deep interred
And distant gone was all he dreamed.
His life to all now unkempt seemed
Yet in such light no place to hide
And distant gone was all he dreamed
His muraled wall the truth decried.
Yet in such light no place to hide
His parcels seeping poison stored.
His muraled wall the truth decried
A heart of vinegar his reward.
On Being Perfect
He tied his life in parcels small
Each bound tight with bits of string
Then hung with care upon a wall
Apologies owed for not a thing.
Each bound tight with bits of string
A mural made for all to see;
Apologies owed for not a thing
His life so tidy; nothing free.
A mural made for all to see;
Considered him in light so bright.
His life so tidy; nothing free,
So all his faults could not take flight.
Considered him in light so bright.
Dilated eyes with vision blurred
So all his faults could not take flight
His past in present deep interred.
Dilated eyes with vision blurred
His life to all now unkempt seemed.
His past in present deep interred
And distant gone was all he dreamed.
His life to all now unkempt seemed
Yet in such light no place to hide
And distant gone was all he dreamed
His muraled wall the truth decried.
Yet in such light no place to hide
His parcels seeping poison stored.
His muraled wall the truth decried
A heart of vinegar his reward.
Wednesday, February 27, 2008
Just (8-Dec-2007)
I was looking through my old stuff for something to offer and came across this. I like it because it reminds me of a happier time and also because it fits in with the request at Read Write Poem for repetition. I'll admit it's a tad cheesy but I like it anyway.
Just
Without her I am
Just a man
Any other hand on my hand is
Just a hand
A day without her is
Just a day
Words from lips other than hers are
Just words
Life without her would be
Just a life
The embrace of another is
Just an embrace
But her embrace is
Just amazing
And with her life is
Just beautiful
Because her words are
Just all my heart requires
In a day with her which is
Just what life is all about
While holding her hand which is
Just what I need
Because with her I am more than
Just a man
Just
Without her I am
Just a man
Any other hand on my hand is
Just a hand
A day without her is
Just a day
Words from lips other than hers are
Just words
Life without her would be
Just a life
The embrace of another is
Just an embrace
But her embrace is
Just amazing
And with her life is
Just beautiful
Because her words are
Just all my heart requires
In a day with her which is
Just what life is all about
While holding her hand which is
Just what I need
Because with her I am more than
Just a man
PWB Poetry Tag 2
This poem started at PWB.
Tag Poem Two
Gasping for breath
like this is the end
Loosing the light
Would you like to add the next line. Here’s what you do:
Be the first to post TAG in the comments. Then take these lines and add one, in a post on your own blog, along with these instructions. Whoever adds the nineteenth line then takes the poem to Poets Who Blog and puts the whole poem in the comment section there. Each person who plays need to also mention what site you were at when you found the poem so that other bloggers can follow the breadcrumbs back to this poem. You can play more than once but not twice in a row.
So who is next?
Tag Poem Two
Gasping for breath
like this is the end
Loosing the light
Would you like to add the next line. Here’s what you do:
Be the first to post TAG in the comments. Then take these lines and add one, in a post on your own blog, along with these instructions. Whoever adds the nineteenth line then takes the poem to Poets Who Blog and puts the whole poem in the comment section there. Each person who plays need to also mention what site you were at when you found the poem so that other bloggers can follow the breadcrumbs back to this poem. You can play more than once but not twice in a row.
So who is next?
Tuesday, February 26, 2008
Repeated Story (26-Feb-2008)
This is in response to the Monday Mural at Poefusion. At first it didn't speak to me at all and I was going to take a pass. But my daughter said to suck it up and try it because it might help me break out of the rut I've been in. So I stared at the picture and this is what resulted.

Fairy by Mariposa Viajera
Strings and wings and feathered things
Brazen flaxen hair.
Tomb and gloom and earthen womb
Fabled maiden fair.
Ships and lips and guided hips
Unforgiving moon.
Keys and bees and flowered trees.
Lovers living tune.
Kiss and bliss and spider hiss
Pregnant falling tear.
Round and round and ever round
Unforgotten fear.

Fairy by Mariposa Viajera
Strings and wings and feathered things
Brazen flaxen hair.
Tomb and gloom and earthen womb
Fabled maiden fair.
Ships and lips and guided hips
Unforgiving moon.
Keys and bees and flowered trees.
Lovers living tune.
Kiss and bliss and spider hiss
Pregnant falling tear.
Round and round and ever round
Unforgotten fear.
Rooted (25-Feb-2008)
This is a response to the poem. site free-for-all. This one is both an acrostic in the first letters and a "hidden message" poem of the kind I first wrote as an assignement from by lost beloved (The Future).
If I'm lucky, Michelle will choose five of the odd words I use here for this week's Friday 5 at Poefusion :-)
paisley pointed out that this will work for the latest Totally Optional Prompts call for a message poem.
Rooted
Fast held am I
each tendrill still
apart from love
requited by you
Amalgam that I bring forth
foundations to know the truth
reality that you foresake
abundance to still the heart
immunity that love denies
deponent to me is this
If I'm lucky, Michelle will choose five of the odd words I use here for this week's Friday 5 at Poefusion :-)
paisley pointed out that this will work for the latest Totally Optional Prompts call for a message poem.
Rooted
Fast held am I
each tendrill still
apart from love
requited by you
Amalgam that I bring forth
foundations to know the truth
reality that you foresake
abundance to still the heart
immunity that love denies
deponent to me is this
Monday, February 25, 2008
Nameless (23-Feb-2008)
This is in response to the call for a name poem from the virtual poetry group poem.
I just tore this one off and I will continue to apologize for the redundancy in my subject matter of late but a grieving process takes time. I am actually hoping that some of these assignments will help me generate works from other places. We shall all wait and see. Maybe I should just break down and do something completely trite...
Nameless
We bound ourselves together
And she named me as her own.
But then she walked away from me
Our name she asks me not to speak.
I am a phantom that lurks about
A mask to hide my hideousness.
How can one survive without
That which others use to find and save us.
I just tore this one off and I will continue to apologize for the redundancy in my subject matter of late but a grieving process takes time. I am actually hoping that some of these assignments will help me generate works from other places. We shall all wait and see. Maybe I should just break down and do something completely trite...
Nameless
We bound ourselves together
And she named me as her own.
But then she walked away from me
Our name she asks me not to speak.
I am a phantom that lurks about
A mask to hide my hideousness.
How can one survive without
That which others use to find and save us.
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