I've been writing poetry since my first regeneration. Feel free to comment on how good or bad you think it is. Some of it is speed poetry which I never used to be able to do and some of you will say I still can't. So feel free to be fair...but always be kind!
Thursday, April 11, 2013
Stillness (6-Apr-2013)
Here's the Pleiades variation on Movement.
Stillness
Stranded sky, concave glass
Spreading light on blue lake
Sloth field, lazy summer
Setting on empty path
Silly bear, laughing flame
Spotting antique table
Sitting and Standing Stone
1 comment:
Alliteration! Love the sibilance, running through the poem and giving it this focus and story.
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