Tuesday, February 26, 2008

Rooted (25-Feb-2008)

This is a response to the poem. site free-for-all. This one is both an acrostic in the first letters and a "hidden message" poem of the kind I first wrote as an assignement from by lost beloved (The Future).

If I'm lucky, Michelle will choose five of the odd words I use here for this week's Friday 5 at Poefusion :-)

paisley pointed out that this will work for the latest Totally Optional Prompts call for a message poem.

Rooted


Fast held am I
each tendrill still
apart from love
requited by you

Amalgam that I bring forth
foundations to know the truth
reality that you foresake
abundance to still the heart
immunity that love denies
deponent to me is this

3 comments:

paisley said...

this will work wonderfully for totally optional prompts on thursday as well....

heres a link.....

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Lirone said...

Love this one - very clever combining the two hidden messages!

Linda Jacobs said...

I've never seen a poem like this. I like it!