This may be the first time I have used such heavy alliteration in poetry and it turned out to be quite a challenge.
Alliterative Loss
Her finely freckled Face
fomented my feckless fate.
A suasion skilled sylph
singing simple siren songs.
Her cunningly crafted Cage
kindly corrected my careless course.
A riotous reckless rage
reducing reason to rabble.
Her dainty dipper Dots
delighted my deepest desire.
A hellish hunting harpy
holds my hapless heart.
Her fizzy fun Fellowship
found my forgotten fuel.
A leeched littered life
leaving Love's labor lost.
16 comments:
absolutely alluring alliteration.... why do i wish you name was alphonse????
You have done a very nice job with your alliterative poem. And, your other links led to a nice write up as well. The little dipper is a unique set of freckles. Have a nice night.
love the "riotous reckless rage reducing reason to rabble..."
Marvellous alliteration. It was a pleasure to read this!
dried piece of toast
"A hellish hunting harpy
holds my hapless heart."
Well done! I suffer in my attempts to use prompts. Kudos to you for being able to utilize them to great affect.
Well-worded write! Strangely sensible. Nicely nuanced!
Powerful poignant poem
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cleverly crafted comments
but I'll resist the urge ...
damn! :-)
i love your alliteration poem. i haven't tried that in ages - it's very enjoyable. :)
Great job! Aptly chosen words and the playful sounds it create added a certain effect to the mind.
I wish you well.
~ Jeques
I hope that in time you will find love once again.
for such tiny little things the freckle has definitely caught you in her net... her fizzy fun fellowship i like...
altogether alliteratively alluring....:)
good job!
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- Murk
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